More terminology amendments added

Fixed more presentation errors and punctuation usage validation
Merge pull request #4 from xiaobai666awa/main
2024-10-31 17:31:06 +08:00 · 2024-10-31 17:29:24 +08:00 · 2024-10-31 15:36:31 +08:00 · 2024-10-31 15:33:40 +08:00 · 2024-10-31 15:33:14 +08:00 · 2024-10-31 15:32:25 +08:00
1 changed files with 16 additions and 16 deletions
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
 			<div class="container">
 				<div class="hero-inner">
 					<div class="hero-copy">
-						<h1 class="hero-title mt-0 is-revealing">方块世界服务器</h1>
+						<h1 class="hero-title mt-0 is-revealing">方块世界群组</h1>
-						<p class="hero-paragraph is-revealing">方块世界群组 官方网站</p>
+						<p class="hero-paragraph is-revealing">方块世界群组&服务器官方网站</p>
 						<p class="hero-cta mb-0 is-revealing">
 							<a class="button button-primary button-shadow" href="https://www.fksjfwq.cn/">方块世界群组 - 论坛</a>
 						</p>
@ -58,8 +58,8 @@
 				<div class="features-inner section-inner has-top-divider">
 					<div class="features-header text-center">
 						<div class="container-sm">
-							<h2 class="section-title mt-0">特色</h2>
+							<h2 class="section-title mt-0">特色内容</h2>
-							<p class="section-paragraph mb-0">我们认为的我们最实用之处</p>
+							<p class="section-paragraph mb-0">我们认为我们群组的最实用之处</p>
 						</div>
 					</div>
 					<div class="features-wrap">
@ -68,8 +68,8 @@
 								<div class="feature-icon">
 									<img src="dist/images/feature-icon-01.svg" alt="Feature 01">
 								</div>
-								<h4 class="feature-title">在线讯息</h4>
+								<h4 class="feature-title">在线联系</h4>
-								<p class="text-sm">点击右下角的图标，进入之后即可与我们对话.</p>
+								<p class="text-sm">点击右下角的图标，进入之后即可与我们取得联系.</p>
 							</div>
 						</div>
 						<div class="feature is-revealing">
@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
 									<img src="dist/images/feature-icon-02.svg" alt="Feature 02">
 								</div>
 								<h4 class="feature-title">服务器配置</h4>
-								<p class="text-sm">服务器使用的是高防BGP机房,全国都设有CDN节点,全国平均延迟30ms.让你的游玩从不卡顿!</p>
+								<p class="text-sm">服务器使用的是高防BGP机房,全国都设有CDN节点,全国平均延迟20ms.让你的游玩从不卡顿!</p>
 							</div>
 						</div>
 						<div class="feature is-revealing">
@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 									<img src="dist/images/feature-icon-03.svg" alt="Feature 03">
 								</div>
 								<h4 class="feature-title">客户端及服务端配置</h4>
-								<p class="text-sm">所有配置文件及其稳定性均经过测试,确保不会因为不兼容导致崩溃.</p>
+								<p class="text-sm">所有配置文件及其稳定性均经过测试，确保不会因为不兼容导致崩溃。</p>
 							</div>
 						</div>
 						<div class="feature is-revealing">
@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
 									<img src="dist/images/feature-icon-04.svg" alt="Feature 04">
 								</div>
 								<h4 class="feature-title">高的响应率</h4>
-								<p class="text-sm">我们经常收到来自玩家的反馈，点击右下角的图标或通过邮箱来反馈在 方块世界服务器 上的问题.</p>
+								<p class="text-sm">我们经常收到来自玩家的反馈，点击右下角的聊天按钮、QQ群或通过邮箱来反馈在 方块世界服务器 上的问题！</p>
 							</div>
 						</div>
 					</div>
@ -312,16 +312,16 @@
 									<div class="accordion-icon"></div>
 								</div>
 								<div class="accordion-body">
-									<p>加入 方块世界服务器QQ群（529892293）</p>
+									<p>加入 方块世界群组QQ群（529892293）</p>
 								</div>
 							</li>
 							<li>
 								<div class="accordion-title">
-									<span>如何快速地、在线联系我们？</span>
+									<span>如何快速地在线联系我们？</span>
 									<div class="accordion-icon"></div>
 								</div>
 								<div class="accordion-body">
-									<p>请点击右下角的按钮。</p>
+									<p>请点击右下角的对话按钮来跟我们取得联系！</p>
 								</div>
 							</li>
 						</ul>
@ -335,7 +335,7 @@
 		<section class="cta section">
 			<div class="container">
 				<div class="cta-inner section-inner is-revealing">
-					<h3 class="section-title mt-0">想了解更多的关于我们的消息？</h3>
+					<h3 class="section-title mt-0">想了解更多有关我们的信息？</h3>
 					<div class="cta-cta">
 						<a class="button button-primary button-shadow" href="mailto:admin@fksjfwq.cn">联系&反馈</a>
 					</div>
@ -347,12 +347,12 @@
 	<footer class="site-footer">
 		<div class="container">
 			<div class="site-footer-inner">
-                <div class="footer-copyright">由KCPOT(卡斯珀特网络)提供强力驱动</div>
+                <div class="footer-copyright">由KCPOT[卡斯珀特网络]提供强力驱动</div>
 				<div class="brand footer-brand">
 					<a href="#">
 						<p class="link">『友情链接』：</p>
-						&nbsp;<a href="//fksj.icu" target="_blank">方块世界群组-主页</a> 
+						&nbsp;<a href="//fksj.icu" target="_blank">「方块世界群组-主页」</a> 
-                        &nbsp;<a href="//blog.ldora.cn/" target="_blank">叮当窝</a>
+                        &nbsp;<a href="//blog.ldora.cn/" target="_blank">「叮当窝」</a>
 					</a>
 				</div>
 				<script type="text/javascript">document.write(unescape("%3Cspan id='cnzz_stat_icon_1280100407'%3E%3C/span%3E%3Cscript src='https://s4.cnzz.com/z_stat.php%3Fid%3D1280100407%26show%3Dpic1' type='text/javascript'%3E%3C/script%3E"));</script>
Author	SHA1	Message	Date
QuarkTree	f4deb2c65c	More terminology amendments added	2024-10-31 17:31:06 +08:00
QuarkTree	d7727a3c38	Fixed more presentation errors and punctuation usage validation	2024-10-31 17:29:24 +08:00
QuarkTree	61295c0dd4	Merge pull request #4 from xiaobai666awa/main A lot of fixes to index.html	2024-10-31 15:36:31 +08:00
xiaobai666awa	f8c7a7444d	Update index.html Modify incorrectly written text	2024-10-31 15:33:40 +08:00
xiaobai666awa	e5a78d3420	Update index.html Modify incorrectly written text	2024-10-31 15:33:14 +08:00
xiaobai666awa	db8fce5bd7	Update index.html Modify incorrectly written text	2024-10-31 15:32:25 +08:00
xiaobai666awa	b3ef68ed69	Update index.html Modify incorrectly written text	2024-10-31 15:32:06 +08:00
xiaobai666awa	2062638d87	Update index.html Correction of title error	2024-10-31 15:31:08 +08:00
xiaobai666awa	3be8b8b55a	Update index.html Correction of an error in the main heading	2024-10-31 15:30:23 +08:00
QuarkTree	452e10a733	Merge pull request #3 from iddoth/main Update index.html	2024-10-30 13:07:26 +08:00
iddo	b4636912b3	Update index.html	2024-10-30 13:05:40 +08:00